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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. AkKL

The bar graph represent the population percentage of computer ownership between 2002 and 2010 and also the education level for the years 2002 and 2010. The number of people purchasing the Computers gradually increases from 2002 to 2010. In 2002, nearly 60% of people are owned computers. Where as in 2004, slightly percentage is increased to 60%. In 2010, almost 80% of population are owned computers. It clearly shows how important technology in future. When it comes to computer ownership by education level, the no high school diploma are less than 20% in 2002 and increases to 40% in 2010. And the High school graduates are approximately 40% in 2002 and 65% in 2010. Where as undergraduates are nearly 55% in 2002 and 85% in 2010.

The bar graph represent the population percentage of computer ownership between 2002 and 2010 and also
 the education level for the years 2002 and 2010.

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