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The giving bar chart depicts the frequently having fast food meals by Americans at restaurants from 2003 to 2013.

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The giving bar chart depicts the frequently having fast food meals by Americans at restaurants from 2003 to 2013. As a general trend, the majority of Americans ate fast food between once a week and once or twice a month in all three years. Furthermore, the lowest percentage was reached by people eating there daily basic. As is presented in the chart, the total proportion of Americans who have meals out of home once a week stood at just other 30% in 2003 and rose to around 33% in 2006. After which it experienced a drop to approximately 5% in 2013. In contrast, the group of people who went to restaurant once or twice a month witnessed a decline of 10% between 2003 and 2006. Following this, it surpassed people eating fast food every week by rising to roughly 33% in the final year of the period. The proportion of those eating in fast-food restaurant several times a week varied between 15% and 20%. while the percentage eating there a few times a year showed an increase from 13% to 15% over the period. Regarding the lowest percentage, people consuming fast food at restaurant everyday remind below 5% over 10-years period. In addition, around 4% of people avoided fast food restaurant completely.
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frequently
having
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fast
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food
meals by Americans at
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restaurants
from 2003 to 2013.

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fast
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food
between
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once
a
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week
and
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once
or twice a month in all three years.
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, the lowest percentage
was reached
by
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people
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eating
there daily basic.

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is presented
in the chart, the total proportion of Americans who have meals out of home
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once
a
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week
stood at
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just
other 30% in 2003 and rose to around 33% in 2006.
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After
which it experienced a drop to approximately 5% in 2013.
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, the group of
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people
who went to
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restaurant
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once
or twice a month witnessed a decline of 10% between 2003 and 2006. Following this, it surpassed
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people
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eating
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fast
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food
every
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week
by rising to roughly 33% in the final
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year
of the period.

The proportion of those
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eating
in
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-food
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restaurant
several times a
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week
varied between 15% and 20%.
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while
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eating
there a few times a
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year
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showed
an increase from 13% to 15% over the period. Regarding the lowest percentage,
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people
consuming
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fast
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food
at
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restaurant
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remind below 5% over 10-years period.
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, around 4% of
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people
avoided
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food
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restaurant
completely.
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IELTS academic The giving bar chart depicts the frequently having fast food meals by Americans at restaurants from 2003 to 2013.

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212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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