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The figures illustrate the Colwicks Art center from by the years 2005. Overall, there are significant changes, and there’re more rooms now than in the past.

The figures illustrate the Colwicks Art center from by the years 2005. Overall, there are significant changes, and there’re more rooms now than in the past. algYo
The figures illustrate the Colwicks Art center from by the years 2005. Overall, there are significant changes, and there’re more rooms now than in the past. Firstly, in the North, the cinema and the concert hall are in groups in the past. But in the present, it’s separating into an individual part and they are located in the Northeast corner. Furthermore, a central exhibition area is elected in the middle of the graph, and a drama studio, either. In the opposite direction, the wasteland no longer exists. A stage and outdoor exhibition and performance place are formed. Secondly, two galleries, which are located in the West, are grouped in a singular gallery. They are placed near the toilets – which have the same changes as the gallery. In addition, a meeting room is divided into two rooms. They are located in the North, near the drama studio. Finally, the snack bars are demolished. They are replaced by a café, which is more convenient more visitors.
The figures illustrate the
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Colwicks
Art center from by the years 2005.
Overall
, there are significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
, and there’re more rooms
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
than in the past.

Firstly
, in the North, the cinema and the concert hall are in groups in the past.
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But
in the present, it’s separating into an individual
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
part and
they
are located
in the Northeast corner.
Furthermore
, a central exhibition area
is elected
in the middle of the graph, and a drama studio, either. In the opposite direction, the wasteland no longer exists. A stage and outdoor exhibition and performance place
are formed
.

Secondly
, two galleries, which
are located
in the West,
are grouped
in a singular gallery. They
are placed
near the toilets
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
which have the same
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changes
as the gallery.
In addition
, a meeting room
is divided
into two rooms. They
are located
in the North, near the drama studio.
Finally
, the snack bars
are demolished
. They
are replaced
by a café, which is more convenient more visitors.
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IELTS academic The figures illustrate the Colwicks Art center from by the years 2005. Overall, there are significant changes, and there’re more rooms now than in the past.

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