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The line graph below presents data on the annual number of games won by four baseball teams in the USA during the 1950s and 1960s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below presents data on the annual number of games won by four baseball teams in the USA during the 1950s and 1960s. nXW57
The line graph provides information about the total number of games by four baseball teams in the USA won during the 1950s and 1970s, a period of 20 years. Overall, the number of wins of the teams has increased and decreased unevenly over the years. In 1950, the team that earned the most wins is the Yankees, while the less is Pirates, with about 60. There was a slight change in 1955, in which 3 of the 4 teams declined the number in a total of the year, with Pirates still at the below. However, it changed in 1960 when Red Sox became the lowest at just 60, far from the highest - Yankees with 98. After then, there happened to be a significant change when White Sox had the most wins at 90 and the Red Sox with the less. It finished in 1970 as White Sox continued to be the team that had the least wins, 50, and the Yankees came back at the top at 97 wins.
The line graph provides information about the total number of games by four baseball
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teams
in the USA won during the 1950s and 1970s, a period of 20 years.
Overall
, the number of wins of the
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teams
has increased and decreased
unevenly
over the years.

In 1950, the
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team
that earned the most wins is the Yankees, while the less is Pirates, with about 60. There was a slight
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in 1955, in which 3 of the 4
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teams
declined the number in a total of the year, with Pirates
still
at the below.

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, it
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changed
in 1960 when Red
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Sox
became the lowest at
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60, far from the highest
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Yankees with 98. After then, there happened to be a significant
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when White
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Sox
had the most wins at 90 and the Red
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Sox
with the less. It finished in 1970 as White
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continued to be the
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that had the least wins, 50, and the Yankees came back at the top at 97 wins.
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IELTS academic The line graph below presents data on the annual number of games won by four baseball teams in the USA during the 1950s and 1960s.

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