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The diagram shows the process of making institute coffee. Write a report of least 150 word showing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

The diagram shows the process of making institute coffee. Write a report of least 150 word showing the main features and making comparison where relevant. pKWo9
The given figure illustrate the process of making instant coffee. It includes server stages like roasting, drying and many more. Overall the process of making instant coffee is differentiated into 11 different stages. From cultivating of coffee beans to packing of instant coffee in Jar. Firstly the worker pick the perfect coffee beans for final product. After cultivating all coffee beans from farmland, it will drive for several days under sun light. Then after coffee beans are roasted under oven and suddenly cool down to room temperature to stop chemical process inside it. After adding perfect temperature the coffee beans are grind and mixed with boiling water. After sometime the mixing of coffee powder and boiling water. Mixture filter out maximum water. Then it cool down to room temperature. The mixture grind last time in a form of frozen liquid. Before packing the grinded mixture is passed from drying process under vacuum chamber, for removing water from mixture. After drying the coffee mixture is known as instant coffee. Lastly the final product is packed into coffee jars and distributed in several places
The
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given
figure illustrate the
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process
of making instant
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coffee
. It includes server stages like roasting, drying and
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many
more.
Overall
the
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process
of making instant
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coffee
is differentiated
into 11
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different
stages. From cultivating of
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coffee
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beans
to packing of instant
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coffee
in Jar.
Firstly
the worker pick the perfect
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coffee
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beans
for final product. After cultivating all
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coffee
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beans
from farmland, it will drive for several days under sun light. Then after
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coffee
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beans
are roasted
under oven and
suddenly
cool down to room temperature to
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stop
chemical
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process
inside it. After adding perfect temperature the
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coffee
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beans
are grind and mixed with boiling
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water
. After sometime the mixing of
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coffee
powder and boiling
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water
.
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Mixture
filter out maximum
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water
. Then it
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cool
down to room temperature. The
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mixture
grind last time in a form of frozen liquid.
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Before
packing the
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grinded
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mixture
is passed
from drying
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process
under vacuum chamber, for removing
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water
from
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mixture
. After drying the
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coffee
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mixture
is known
as instant
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coffee
.
Lastly
the final product
is packed
into
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coffee
jars and distributed in several
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places
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the process of making institute coffee. Write a report of least 150 word showing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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