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The given two maps provides information about changes in the seaside towns of seaville in the years 1980 and 2010.

The given two maps provides information about changes in the seaside towns of seaville in the years 1980 and 2010. 59lA
The given two maps provides information about changes in the seaside towns of seaville in the years 1980 and 2010. Overall, we can see the vast changes in the coastal village of Seaville. The village is developed significantly from holiday cottages to a permanent houses and also amenities increased. In 1980, Seaville was a small village developed to least attracting only a few tourists who were accommodation in the holiday cottages and a small hotel. To the east side have a eastbank, on the west side there was a Marsh, on the behind holiday cottages their and a hotel. On the marsh front side their was a woodland, besides the beach the town only offered a tea room. However, after 30 years Seaville was huge developed town. The marsh has been removed and the cottages also cleaned to built a permanent houses. Retirement village has been built to the west of the main road. On the eastbank side in front road after the cross road their was a new constructed cottages built. Besides the beach the town new constructed hotel and restaurant and on the North side top of the map woodland has been removed and a new golf course built.
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two maps provides information about
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changes
in the seaside
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towns
of
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seaville
in the years 1980 and 2010.

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, we can
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the vast
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changes
in the coastal
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village
of
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Seaville
. The
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village
is developed
significantly
from holiday
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cottages
to a permanent
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houses
and
also
amenities increased.

In 1980,
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Seaville
was a
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small
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village
developed to least attracting
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only
a few tourists who were accommodation in the holiday
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cottages
and a
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small
hotel. To the east side have
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a
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eastbank
, on the west side there was a Marsh, on the behind holiday
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cottages
their and a hotel. On the marsh front side
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their
was a woodland,
besides
the beach the
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town
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only
offered a tea room.

However
, after 30 years
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Seaville
was huge developed
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town
. The marsh has
been removed
and the
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cottages
also
cleaned
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to built
a permanent
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houses
. Retirement
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village
has
been built
to the west of the main road. On the
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eastbank
side in front road after the cross road
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their
was a
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new constructed
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cottages
built.
Besides
the beach the
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town
new constructed hotel and restaurant and on the North side top of the map woodland has
been removed
and a new golf course built.
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IELTS academic The given two maps provides information about changes in the seaside towns of seaville in the years 1980 and 2010.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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