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the graph below shows carbon dioxide emmision in several areas of the world

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The graph illustrates the amount of emitted CO2 in nine particular parts worldwide in the year 1995. Overall, when it came to tonnes per person, North America saw the highest number and the smallest carbon dioxide amount belonged to the Pacific region. As can be seen from the graph, North American released up to 19. 4 tonnes which is no doubt to be the biggest when comparing to eight other regions. Followed by 9, 25 tonnes of Central and Eastern Europe, OECD led the second amount at 10. 97 tonnes per person. Additionally, in the west of Europe, citizens emitted a lower amount than that of mentioned ones with 8. 85 tonnes. In small sources of greenhouse gas emissions, the Middle East and Central Asia had 4. 89 tonnes emitted, the amount was over twice as much as Non- OECD and Pacific at 2. 40 tonnes and 2. 31 tonnes respectively. The greenhouse gases released in Africa was higher than in Latin America and the Caribbean with 3. 69 tonnes for the former and 2. 58 tonnes for the latter.

The graph illustrates the amount

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small
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 was over twice as much as Non- OECD and Pacific at 2. 40 tonnes and 2. 31 tonnes respectively
. The greenhouse gases released in Africa was higher than in Latin America and the Caribbean with 3. 69 tonnes for the former and 2. 58 tonnes for the latter. 