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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the USA and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the USA and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. KgY9
The graph table provides information about the unemployment rates in the United States of America and in Japan over a 5-year period, from March 1993 to March 1999. Overall, the percentage of unemployed American people steadily decreased until approximately March 1995. In March 1995 the trend was reserved and the US unemployment rate started to rise again towards the end of the same year, followed by a plateau period and a minor growth around the end of 1996. From 1997 the American unemployment rate continued to decline until March 1999. Whereas it is noticeable a significant decline of the unemployment rate in the USA over the period given, an opposite trend is appreciable for Japan. In addition, while the unemployment rate in the USA dropped from approximately 7% in March 1993 to about 4. 2% 6 years later, the percentage of jobless Japanese people constantly grew and it went up from approximately 2. 4% in March 1993 to over 4. 5% in March 1999 (about 4. 7%).
The graph table provides information about the
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in the United States of America and in Japan over a 5-year period, from March 1993 to March 1999.

Overall
, the percentage of unemployed American
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steadily
decreased until approximately March 1995. In March 1995 the trend
was reserved
and the US
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unemployment
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started
to rise again towards the
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end
of the same year, followed by a plateau period and a minor growth around the
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end
of 1996. From 1997 the American
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unemployment
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rate
continued to decline until March 1999. Whereas it is noticeable a significant decline of the
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in the USA over the period
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, an opposite trend is appreciable for Japan.

In addition
, while the
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in the USA dropped from approximately 7% in March 1993 to about 4. 2% 6 years later, the percentage of jobless Japanese
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people
constantly
grew and it went up from approximately 2. 4% in March 1993 to over 4. 5% in March 1999 (about 4. 7%).

IELTS academic The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the USA and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

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