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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the USA and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph table provides information about the unemployment rates in the United States of America and in Japan over a 5-year period, from March 1993 to March 1999. Overall, the percentage of unemployed American people steadily decreased until approximately March 1995. In March 1995 the trend was reserved and the US unemployment rate started to rise again towards the end of the same year, followed by a plateau period and a minor growth around the end of 1996. From 1997 the American unemployment rate continued to decline until March 1999. Whereas it is noticeable a significant decline of the unemployment rate in the USA over the period given, an opposite trend is appreciable for Japan. In addition, while the unemployment rate in the USA dropped from approximately 7% in March 1993 to about 4. 2% 6 years later, the percentage of jobless Japanese people constantly grew and it went up from approximately 2. 4% in March 1993 to over 4. 5% in March 1999 (about 4. 7%).

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 in the United States of America and in Japan over a 5-year period, from March 1993 to March 1999.

Overall
, the percentage of unemployed American This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
steadily
 decreased until approximately March 1995. In March 1995 the trend was reserved
 and the US You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcutback
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rate
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started
 to rise again towards the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the same year, followed by a plateau period and a minor growth around the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 1996. From 1997 the American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcutback
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rate
 continued to decline until March 1999. Whereas it is noticeable a significant decline of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcutback
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rate
 in the USA over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
, an opposite trend is appreciable for Japan.

In addition
, while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcutback
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rate
 in the USA dropped from approximately 7% in March 1993 to about 4. 2% 6 years later, the percentage of jobless Japanese This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
constantly
 grew and it went up from approximately 2. 4% in March 1993 to over 4. 5% in March 1999 (about 4. 7%). 