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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. dAp2
The following diagram provides that percentage in average house prices in various cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with average house prices in 1989. Overall, the bart chart shows that UK price's changes increased the percentage of 12%. However, average house prices of Frankfurt changed only 2%. According to information, the highest change was in London during 1996 and 2002. But London and Tokyo changed the least in average house prices between 1990 and 1995. In 1990-1995, Spain and Germany price's increased the percentage of 2%. New York decreased in 1990, however, this country's price changed between 1996 and 2002. Tokyo decreased from 1990 to 2002. In average house price of Madrid consisted in the percentage of 2% in 1990.
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in various cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with
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in 1989.

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the least in
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between 1990 and 1995. In 1990-1995, Spain and Germany price's increased the
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of 2%. New York decreased in 1990,
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between 1996 and 2002. Tokyo decreased from 1990 to 2002. In
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of Madrid consisted in the
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of 2% in 1990.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

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