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The given table shows the amount of money a single person or a couple in Australia need for lifestyle comfortably after retiring.

The given table shows the amount of money a single person or a couple in Australia need for lifestyle comfortably after retiring. YBL55
The given table shows the amount of money a single person or a couple in Australia need for lifestyle comfortably after retiring. It is clear that the expenditure of a retired couple is higher than the figure for a retired single person. The average of money a retired single person spending on housing is the biggest while a retired couple spend more money on leisure. The expenditure for housing of a retired couple is 194 while the figure for a retired single person is only 184. A retired couple spends the most money on leisure standing at 202, which is 62 higher than the amount of money a single person in Australia needs when she/he retire. A couple spends 177 for health while a single person wastes 122. Both a single person and a couple spend money similarly on transport about 107 and 108 after they retire. In contrast, a retired couple spends 80 on clothing, which is 36 higher than a retired single person’s expenditure. Likewise, the average of money a retired couple need for comfortable lifestyle for food and others respectively 100 and 70 while the figure for a retired single person is 50 and 37. Finally, the total amount of money a retired couple need for a comfortable lifestyle is 931, meanwhile the figure for a retired single person is only 684
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that the expenditure of a
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is higher than the
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for a
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. The average of
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spending on housing is the biggest while a
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couple
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more
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on leisure.

The expenditure for housing of a
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is 194 while the
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184. A
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on leisure standing at 202, which is 62 higher than the amount of
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in Australia
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when she/he retire. A
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177 for health while a
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wastes 122.

Both a
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and a
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similarly
on transport about 107 and 108 after they retire.
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80 on clothing, which is 36 higher than a
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100 and 70 while the
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is 50 and 37.
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a
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for a comfortable lifestyle is 931, meanwhile the
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for a
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IELTS academic The given table shows the amount of money a single person or a couple in Australia need for lifestyle comfortably after retiring.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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