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The Bart charts show the difference in the usage of water in three various ways in six countries.

The Bart charts show the difference in the usage of water in three various ways in six countries. oERJB

Overall, in all 6 countries the biggest proportion of water was used for agricultural purposes. The lowest numbers were on domestic use in 3 areas (Africa, central Asia and South East Asia). Water was utilized mostly in agricultural purposes more than over three-quarters in 4 countries. While this number differs significantly nearly 40 % compared with other 2 countries. The lowest proportion was on domestic usage in 3 countries. While this numbers were more slightly about 3 and 4 % in Europe, North and South America. The people in Central and South East Asia used water at the same proportion at 7%. Industrial use of water was utilized mostly in 2 big areas. There were twice as many usage of water in Europe as industrial use in North America. In other countries this proportion was dramatically low and African and Central Asian local people was the lowest users of water in industrial purposes nearly the same percentage 7 and 5.

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