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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart demonstrate the consequences of quiry concerning how people purchase and consume coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. In overall, the same amount of people went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks in Melbourne and Hobart. While the people who bought instant coffee was frustrating, the percent of people who bought fresh coffee was decreased dramatically in last 4 weeks. 64% of people who went to a café for coffee or tea In Hobart and Melbourne was the highest indicator while the people bought fresh coffee was 38% and 42% relatively. The people who bought instant coffee involved most is 54% in Hobart. The least percentage of people who bought fresh coffee was approximately 34%, the same for Brisbane and Adelaide. The least percentage bought instant coffee by people was 45 %, while fresh coffee was 44% in Sydney.
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or tea In Hobart and Melbourne was the highest indicator while the
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involved most is 54% in Hobart.

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was approximately 34%, the same for Brisbane and Adelaide. The least percentage
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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