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The given table provides information about the amount of money spent on advertising for four car trademarks in the UK in 2002

The given table provides information about the amount of money spent on advertising for four car trademarks in the UK in 2002 YR29r
The given table provides information about the amount of money spent on advertising for four car trademarks in the UK in 2002. Overall, the Renault where spend money on advertising was the largest. Besides, the advertising on TV was the most popular. As can be seen from the table, the amount of money spent on advertising on TV by all companies was over 45 million and hold the first place was Cetirizine with 70 million. In contrast, only 6 and 5 million were spent on advertising for Cinema by Renault and Vauxhall while Rover and Cetirizine did not spend money on Cinema. On the other hand, the amount of money spent on Press of Renault was the highest, at 45 million. In addition, 7 million was spent on Outdoor by Renault and Vauxhall. The figure for Rover and Cetirizine was 2 and 3 million respectively. Meanwhile, the amount of money spent on Radio by all companies was the same, at 15 million
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on advertising for four car trademarks in the UK in 2002.
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on advertising was the largest.
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, the advertising on TV was the most popular.

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was over 45
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and hold the
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Cetirizine
with 70
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6 and 5
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on advertising for Cinema by Renault and
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Vauxhall
while Rover and
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Cetirizine
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on Cinema.

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on Press of Renault was the highest, at 45
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.
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, 7
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was
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on Outdoor by Renault and
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Vauxhall
. The figure for Rover and
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respectively
. Meanwhile, the
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on Radio by all
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was the same, at 15
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IELTS academic The given table provides information about the amount of money spent on advertising for four car trademarks in the UK in 2002

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