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The given table illustrates the number of vegetables, meat, wheat, bean, and cheese consumed weekly in grams per capita in a European country in three different years.

The given table illustrates the number of vegetables, meat, wheat, bean, and cheese consumed weekly in grams per capita in a European country in three different years. 0aBb9
The given table illustrates the number of vegetables, meat, wheat, bean, and cheese consumed weekly in grams per capita in a European country in three different years. Overall, food consumption was rose slightly except meat. It is also noticeable that, vegetable accounted for the largest part of their dietary. While the lest consumed food has always been cheese. Vegetables always had been the highest portion of people food’s intake, followed by meat in 1992, at 2142 grams and 1148 grams respectively. The consumption of vegetables rose slightly to 2190 grams and reached the peak at 2220 grams in 2012. While the period saw a tiny increase in the figure of meat in 2002 at 1211 grams before dropped back to 1132 in 2012. Wheat, bean, cheese made up the rest of the people’s food intake at 837 grams, 532 grams and 113 grams respectively in 1992. And these figures grew and reached their own peak at 977 grams, 590 grams and 125 grams respectively in the end of the period.
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table illustrates the number of vegetables,
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meat
, wheat, bean, and cheese consumed weekly in
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grams
per capita in a European country in three
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different
years.

Overall
,
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food
consumption was rose
slightly
except
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meat
. It is
also
noticeable that, vegetable accounted for the largest part of their dietary. While the lest consumed
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food
has always been cheese.

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people
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food’s
intake, followed by
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meat
in 1992, at 2142
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grams
and 1148
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grams
respectively
. The consumption of vegetables rose
slightly
to 2190
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grams
and reached the peak at 2220
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grams
in 2012. While the period
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saw
a tiny increase in the figure of
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meat
in 2002 at 1211
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grams
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before
dropped back to 1132 in 2012.

Wheat, bean, cheese made up the rest of the
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people
’s
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food
intake at 837
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grams
, 532
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grams
and 113
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grams
respectively
in 1992. And these figures grew and reached their
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peak at 977
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grams
, 590
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grams
and 125
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grams
respectively
in the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The given table illustrates the number of vegetables, meat, wheat, bean, and cheese consumed weekly in grams per capita in a European country in three different years.

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