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The given table illustrates the languages that high school teenagers speak at home from one school district in the United State in 2008 and 2014.

The given table illustrates the languages that high school teenagers speak at home from one school district in the United State in 2008 and 2014. j8ymw
The given table illustrates the languages that high school teenagers speak at home from one school district in the United State in 2008 and 2014. It is clear that, Spanish was the most widespread language both in 2008 and 2014, while Polish and Nepalese were at the bottom position in 2008 and 2014 respectively. Spanish led the way with 15, 110 speakers in 2008, before reaching the peak with 28, 816 students in 2014. Similarly, Chinese accounted for 1, 875 speakers, experienced a moderate rise in 2014. Besides, The number of people who speak Korean and Vietnamese in 2008 was 3, 029 people and 2, 557 people respectively, followed by a slightly downward trend in 2014. In term of the amount of teenagers speak languages at home, Arabic and Russian started at a relatively low position of only around 420 speakers, before marginally rose to approximately 1, 500 people in 2014. Tagalog, Nepalese stood at the lowest point, followed by slightly going up, wheares Polish bottom out at only 82 students in 2014.
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table illustrates the languages that high school
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speak at home from one school district in the United State in 2008 and 2014.

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that, Spanish was the most widespread language both in 2008 and 2014, while Polish and Nepalese were at the bottom position in 2008 and 2014
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Spanish led the way with 15, 110 speakers in 2008,
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reaching the peak with 28, 816 students in 2014.
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, Chinese accounted for 1, 875 speakers, experienced a moderate rise in 2014.
Besides
, The number of
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who speak Korean and Vietnamese in 2008 was 3, 029
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people
and 2, 557
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people
respectively
, followed by a
slightly
downward trend in 2014. In term of the amount of
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languages at home, Arabic and Russian
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started
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around 420 speakers,
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rose to approximately 1, 500
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in 2014. Tagalog, Nepalese stood at the lowest point, followed by
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going up,
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wheares
Polish bottom out at
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82 students in 2014.

IELTS academic The given table illustrates the languages that high school teenagers speak at home from one school district in the United State in 2008 and 2014.

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