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The given table illustrates the consumption of five major types of fast food in the past, the present, and with a prediction in the future. These statistics are considered in the city, Melbourne.

The given table illustrates the consumption of five major types of fast food in the past, the present, and with a prediction in the future. These statistics are considered in the city, Melbourne. 7E8b
The given table illustrates the consumption of five major types of fast food in the past, the present, and with a prediction in the future. These statistics are considered in the city, Melbourne. In 2005, hamburger made up a large proportion of the fast food consumption units followed by fried chicken, salad, fried rice, and noodles, but the difference rate between the second one and the third was significantly huge. During the last years, hamburger and fried chicken approximately sustained their high consumption, while salad experienced a modest increase reaching three times as many as its former units; on the other hand, fried rice and noodles showed a slight growth in their consumption rate. It is predicted that hamburger and fried chicken will remain to be the Melburnians' favourite fast food in 2025, but they will probably begin to consume salad more than before, whereas fried rice and noodles are likely to maintain a stable consumption rate.
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rice, and noodles,
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chicken approximately sustained their high
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, while salad experienced a modest increase reaching three times as
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rice and noodles
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chicken will remain to be the
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IELTS academic The given table illustrates the consumption of five major types of fast food in the past, the present, and with a prediction in the future. These statistics are considered in the city, Melbourne.

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