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The given table chart illustrates the proportion of income spent on four common items in the UK in 1998.

The given table chart illustrates the proportion of income spent on four common items in the UK in 1998. BL2k6
Having a myopic look at the table chart, the maximum percentage of girls income spent on music at the UK in 1998 which were noticed as 40% whereas the minimum ratio of women income allocated on videos at the UK in 1998 which were recorded as 0. 5%. The percentile of men income consumed on food and electronic equipment which were observed as 25% and 5% respectively. Turning to the rest of details, a resemblance of 5% can be seen income devoted on electronic equipment and music those were adults. Surprisingly, 2 folds more men income devoted on electronic equipment as compare to music which was only 5%. The difference of 9% can be seen income allocated on food and videos those were boys. Overall, it is clear that food was the only item in which the adults spent more than children from their available earnings.
Having a myopic look at the table chart, the maximum percentage of girls
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income
spent on music at the UK in 1998 which
were noticed
as 40% whereas the minimum ratio of women
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income
allocated on videos at the UK in 1998 which
were recorded
as 0. 5%. The percentile of
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men
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income
consumed on food and electronic equipment which
were observed
as 25% and 5%
respectively
. Turning to the rest of
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details
, a resemblance of 5% can be
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seen
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income
devoted on electronic equipment and music those were adults.
Surprisingly
, 2 folds more
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men
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income
devoted on electronic equipment as compare to music which was
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only
5%. The difference of 9% can be
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seen
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income
allocated on food and videos those were boys.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that food was the
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only
item in which the adults spent more than children from their available earnings.
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IELTS academic The given table chart illustrates the proportion of income spent on four common items in the UK in 1998.

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