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Some people that reading traditional books is better than reading the same material online. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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In this golden era, we all know that books are like our that kind of friend because it always help us without any complaint and demand. It gave us the information about our tradition and our history as well as knowledge about the world. So we can say it has a importance in everyone's life. If we are talking about the difference between online books and traditional books, there is huge comparison among them. According to some specialist, they believe that traditional books are best option for get a knowledge about our tradition, because of the its presence in the front us and we can make a good concentration with it while reading and for the online books with a same material their opinion is quite different. For this, they said that online books or material are useless because to read it they have to use the computer or other electronic devices which are not a good source of concentration or focus. On the other hand, from students advice they are against the specialist theory. They said traditional books cant make a comfortable environment for them and the online material is very friendly because it is easy to found and cheaper than books. They totally agree with the online era, because they only want to know about the main points as compared fully fledged information. Finally according to my point of view, both are having a importance but according to generation to generation. For the elders or old generation people, traditional books are best and for the new comers, online books are the best option
In this golden era, we all know that
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books
are like our that kind of friend
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because
it always
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help
us without any complaint and demand. It gave us the information about our tradition and our history
as well
as knowledge about the world.
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So
we can say it has
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a
importance in everyone's life.

If we are talking about the difference between
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online
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books
and
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traditional
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books
, there is huge comparison among them. According to
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some
specialist, they believe that
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traditional
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books
are best option for
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get
a knowledge about our tradition,
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because
of
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the its presence
in the front
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us and
we can
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make
a
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good
concentration with it while reading and for the
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online
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books
with a same material their opinion is quite
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different
. For this, they said that
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online
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books
or material are useless
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because
to read it they
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have to
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use
the computer or other electronic devices which are not a
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good
source of concentration or focus.

On the other hand
, from students advice they are against the specialist theory. They said
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traditional
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books
Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?
cant
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make
a comfortable environment for them and the
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online
material is
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very
friendly
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because
it is easy to found and cheaper than
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books
. They
totally
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agree
with the
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online
era,
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because
they
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only
want to know about the main points as compared
fully
fledged information.

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Finally
according to my point of view, both are having
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a
importance
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but
according
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to generation to generation
. For the elders or
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old
generation
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people
,
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traditional
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books
are best and for the
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new comers
,
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online
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books
are the best
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IELTS academic Some people that reading traditional books is better than reading the same material online.

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5.5
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