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Map illustrates the changes in island

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The maps illustrate the main changes after redeveloping which have taken place on an island. Overall, there did not use to be any tourist facilities, but several have been built after the redevelopment of the island, including new entertainment places and accommodation. An interesting development has been the introduction of a pier in the southern part of an island, and two sailboats have appeared next to the pier. After transformation, the island has been pedestrianized. Moreover, a vehicle track has been built that can navigate tourists. Another noticeable change is that swimming facilities are now available in the western part of the island, around the beach. One of the main constructions is a reception at the center of the island and also a large restaurant at the top. It is interesting to note that significant numbers of huts have been constructed at the left and right sides of the reception without any noticeable damage to the trees.
The maps illustrate the main
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after redeveloping which have taken place on an island.

Overall
, there did not
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use to
be any tourist facilities,
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but
several have
been built
after the redevelopment of the
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island
, including new entertainment places and accommodation.

An interesting development has been the introduction of a pier in the southern part of an
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island
, and two sailboats have appeared
next
to the pier. After transformation, the
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island
has
been pedestrianized
.
Moreover
, a vehicle
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track
has
been built
that can navigate tourists. Another noticeable
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change
is that swimming facilities are
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now
available in the western part of the
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island
, around the beach.

One of the main constructions is a reception at the center of the
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island
and
also
a large restaurant at the top. It is interesting to note that significant numbers of huts have
been constructed
at the
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left
and right sides of the reception without any noticeable damage to the trees.
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6.5
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