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Is actually organic food better than any other kind of food for your health as well as for the environment? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is actually organic food better than any other kind of food for your health as well as for the environment? ewY3G
There has always been a debate about those who buy organic food and those who prefer buying non organic food. Although many people purchase non-organic food, is this really the best one and the most useful in terms of health? There are some reasons why there are still people who claim that, because of different factors, non-organic food should be prefered to any other food. In the first place, non-organic foods are as nutritious as organic food. In fact, until now there is no scientific evidence about the nutritional quality between organic farming and normal farming. Secondly, there are often money-problems. No one can deny that the cost of living has increased during these years and not everyone could afford higher expenses, as a consequence they prefer buying processed or non-organic food rather than fresh and organic food, whose cost is higher. If there are no substantial differences between the two types of food, why should we opt for organic one? Actually, there are many reasons to choose organic food, but the most important one concerns our health. For example, if there are any chemical products, they are used in the form of pesticides or fertilizer, but these products do not damage your body. Moreover, organic food supports animals. In fact, thanks to organic farming, animals would not be subjected to intensive breeding and they will be able to live safely. In my opinion, all of us should prefer organic food if you want to make a good investment on your health without thinking of spending some extra money. In conclusion, despite some financial problems in buying organic food, It is certain that organic food is better than any other food, both for our health and for the environment.
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first
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are as nutritious as
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. In fact, until
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there is no scientific evidence about the nutritional quality between
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farming and normal farming.

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money-problems. No one can deny that the cost of living has increased during these years and not everyone could afford higher expenses, as a consequence they prefer buying processed or non-organic
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rather
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, whose cost is higher. If there are no substantial differences between the two types of
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, why should we opt for
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one?

Actually, there are
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,
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one concerns our health.
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in the form of pesticides or fertilizer,
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these products do not damage your body.

Moreover
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supports animals. In fact, thanks to
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farming, animals would not
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if you want to
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investment on your health without thinking of spending
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conclusion, despite
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financial problems in buying
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, It is certain that
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is better than any other
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, both for our health and for the environment.
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IELTS academic Is actually organic food better than any other kind of food for your health as well as for the environment?

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