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The given process chart depicts the information about the process of producing chocolate.

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The given process chart depicts the information about the process of producing chocolate. From the overview of the given data it's vivid that, in the chart there are total 10steps to complete the task, if any step is missing then this process will be holted. After having a keen observation of the given data it's illustrated that, initially, cacao tree ripe red pods are growing in South America, Africa and Indonesia. In the second step, pods are harvested and white cacao beans are removed. After that, beans are fermented then, beans are spread in sun to dry, lately, cacao beans are Packed in the sacks. Probing further, beans are transported by train or lorry and beans are sent to factory. In the eight step, beans are roasted approximately 350degrees then, beans are crushed and outer shell is removed. In the final step, inner part of beans are pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.
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process chart depicts the information about the process of producing chocolate.

From the overview of the
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given
data it's vivid that, in the chart there are total
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10steps
to complete the task, if any
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step
is missing then this process will be
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holted
.

After having a keen observation of the
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given
data it's illustrated that,
initially
, cacao tree ripe red pods are growing in South America, Africa and Indonesia. In the second
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step
, pods
are harvested
and white cacao
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beans
are removed
. After that,
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beans
are fermented
then,
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beans
are spread
in sun to dry, lately, cacao
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beans
are Packed
in the sacks.

Probing
further
,
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beans
are transported
by train or lorry and
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beans
are
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sent
to factory. In the eight
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step
,
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beans
are roasted
approximately 350degrees then,
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beans
are crushed
and outer shell
is removed
. In the final
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step
, inner part of
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beans
are pressed
and liquid chocolate
is produced
.
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