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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of water usage for Industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic in six continent of the world.

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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of water usage for Industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic in six continent of the world. As an overall trend, the Agricultural use had a majority role for four areas, whereas North America and Europe used a significant their water for Industrial use. According to the in information provided, about half percent of water was used for Industrial purpose. Likewise, there was a equal value for domestic nessesity of roughly 15% in both region, while Agricultural use was just below two-fifths percent for North America and almost a third for Europe. Regarding to the remaining four nations, more than four-fifths percent used water by all continent except for South America, it contribute roughly three-quartes. Similarly, Central Asia accounted the highest water use for domestic requires. Therefore, South America used the highest proportion of water the same domestic requirement. In addition, 7% of water use for Industrial use in Africa.
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trend, the Agricultural
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had a majority role for four areas, whereas North America and Europe
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a significant their
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Industrial
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.

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Industrial
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a
equal value for
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nessesity
of roughly 15% in both region, while Agricultural
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below two-fifths percent for North America and almost a third for Europe.

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the remaining four nations, more than four-fifths percent
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used
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by all continent
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except for
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three-quartes
.
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, South America
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the highest proportion of
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in Africa.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of water usage for Industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic in six continent of the world.

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