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This graph illustrates information about the number of a students who study these three languages in a period in future between 2020 and 2030

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The diagram illustrates anticipations about how many students will study three major languages over the ten-year period from 2020 to 2030. The figures are given in millions. Overall, it is interesting to note that there will be a steady upward trend in the number of students who study English, Spanish or Mandarin along with the globalization. Also, it is striking that Mandarin will have been the second most popular language for students by 2028 instead of Spanish. To begin with, if we look at English, it will start at around 550 million, which is the highest figure in 2020, and then there will be a steady increase to approximately 700 million in 2024. However, this will be followed by a considerable drop to about 630 million in 2026, after which the figure will see another steady increase to around 750 in 2030, which is the highest number over the whole period. As regards Spanish and Mandarin, Spanish will go through a gradual growth from 220 million to 480 million in 2030, whereas there will be a considerable and steady rise in the number of people who study Mandarin. The interesting point is that the number of people who study Mandarin or Spanish will be almost the same in 2024.
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