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5 types of vehicles registered

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The chart shows the registration of various types of transportation in Australia between 2010 and 2014. In summary, the types of vehicles registered which generally climbed in line with their proportion. Especially, motorcycles and light trucks followed by three types of transportation. Regarding the number of vehicles, we see this data in 2012 was 11800000, rising to 12700000, prior to peaking of 13000000 in 2014. Correspondingly, the commercial vehicles registered was gradual increase over the period, going from 2300000 to 2600000 in 2012. Moreover, this figure reached the highest point at 2700000 in 2014 (plus 17, 4%). Strikingly, there was a similar pattern in the proportion of heavy trucks and light trucks, which was a marked upward trends year by year with 8, 3% and 23, 5%, respectively. Additionally, in motorcycles these registration rise by roughly half, from 106000 in 2010 to over 130000 in 2014. This data was a dramatical surge and reached the highest point at 30% over the chart.
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the registration of various types of transportation in Australia between 2010 and 2014.

In summary, the types of vehicles registered which
generally
climbed in line with their proportion.
Especially
, motorcycles and light trucks followed by three types of transportation.

Regarding the number of vehicles, we
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see
this data in 2012 was 11800000, rising to 12700000, prior to peaking of 13000000 in 2014.
Correspondingly
, the commercial vehicles registered was gradual increase over the period, going from 2300000 to 2600000 in 2012.
Moreover
, this figure reached the highest point at 2700000 in 2014 (plus 17, 4%).

Strikingly
, there was a similar pattern in the proportion of heavy trucks and light trucks, which was a marked upward trends year by year with 8, 3% and 23, 5%,
respectively
.
Additionally
, in motorcycles these registration rise by roughly half, from 106000 in 2010 to over 130000 in 2014. This data was a
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dramatical
surge and reached the highest point at 30% over the chart.
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