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The given pie charts illustrate the information in proportion of age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and forecasted for figures 2050.

The given pie charts illustrate the information in proportion of age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and forecasted for figures 2050. Xqbyr
The given pie charts illustrate the information in proportion of age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and forecasted for figures 2050. The general overview here is that in 2000 the majority of population in Yemen were kids to early-teen groups, While after 50-year later most of citizen in this country were people in age 15-59 years on the contrary in Yemen the highest amount of population were mid-teen to those in their late fifties throughout the period. According to the charts, it is clear that the people in mid-teen to late fifties group were the most population in Italy in 2000, accounting for 61. 6%. There is a significant moment in 2050, it is projected that there is a steady fall of 15. 4% of the number of people in this group. On the contrary Yemen represented the extent of 46. 3% of people in age 15-59 years, after five decade, the population extent of this people group rose moderately to 57. 3%. Moreover, The figure of citizen of kids to early-teen group in Yemen dramatical drop of 13% to 37% over the period. Similarly, after passing 50 years, the kids and early-teens population of Italy decrease a mere by 3% to 11. 5%. It is interesting to note that there is a remarkable increase of 18% to 42. 3% of elderly people in Italy in 2050. By contrary, the number of people in this group in Yemen grew an unnoticeably by 2% to 5. 3% over the period predicted.
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in Italy in 2000, accounting for 61. 6%. There is a significant moment in 2050, it
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of Italy decrease a mere by 3% to 11. 5%. It is interesting to note that there is a remarkable increase of 18% to 42. 3% of elderly
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in Italy in 2050. By contrary, the number of
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IELTS academic The given pie charts illustrate the information in proportion of age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and forecasted for figures 2050.

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