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The chart below shows the percentage of growth in industrial production in three countries, from March 2017 to December 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of growth in industrial production in three countries, from March 2017 to December 2018. Mr83e
The line chart gives information about the percentage of growth in industrial production in three countries and provide details from March 2017 to December 2018. Overall, country 1 graph is decreased to month by month and country 2 percentage of growth in industrial production is starting decreased in december-17. Country 3-line graph is Parallel in eight months. Firstly, country-1 starting percentage of growth in industrial production is around00 6% and in the September 2017, graph will be decreased and same condition in December 2017 and in the January 2018, graph increased rather than December 2017. Secondly, reached in the last approximately -1%. Country-2-line graph started too around 6% and these graphs dramatically decreased in January 2018 and after decreased country 2 growth in industrial production in around –8%. Thirdly, country line graph starts with around 3% of growth in industrial production and country 3-line graph no more changes in eight-month period and lastly in December 2018 country 3 industrial production is around 3%. In conclusion, country 1 and country 2-line graph is regular decreased to eight months and country 3 graph is parallel in 2017 to 2018.
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from March 2017 to December 2018.

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In conclusion
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