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The given pie charts give the information about the main means of transport of people commuting to one university in the years 2004 and 2009.

The given pie charts give the information about the main means of transport of people commuting to one university in the years 2004 and 2009. n1Dbo

The given pie charts give the information about the main means of transport of people commuting to one university in the years 2004 and 2009. At the beginning of course, we can see that the figure for Car accounted for the majority of in the year 2004 of the whole chart, at 51%, but this number suddenly went down to 28%. Next, Train and Walking were slight upward trend from in the years 2004 and 2009. More specific is the percentage of train went up from 3% to 4% and walking increase from 4% to 6%. At the last of course, the figure for Bus and Bicycle were remarkable an upward trend from 2004 to 2009. Bus went up from 33% to 46% and Bicycle increased from 9% to 16%.

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 commuting to one university in the years 2004 and 2009.

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, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the figure for Car accounted for the majority of in the year 2004 of the whole chart, at 51%, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this number suddenly
 went down to 28%.

Next
, Train and Walking were slight upward trend from in the years 2004 and 2009. More specific is the percentage of train went up from 3% to 4% and walking increase from 4% to 6%.

At the last of course
, the figure for Bus and Bicycle were remarkable an upward trend from 2004 to 2009. Bus went up from 33% to 46% and Bicycle increased from 9% to 16%. 