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The flow chart show how the laundry works.

The flow chart show how the laundry works. E76LB
The given flow chart illustrates the working style of a laundry. Overall, it is evident that this process consists of multiple steps, beginning with the collection of clothes from the suppliers and ending up with the shifting of the washed items to the folding machine. First of all, the laundry are gathered from the distributed from which towels and linens are separated. After that, this clothes are collected into the bags. Then this loaded bags are transferred and field into the loundernate, which takes 2 hours for cleaning of the dresses. In the next stage, the processing is done to drain some water from the laundry. Moreover, from this drained dressing materials, the towels are dried completely, while the linens are left half-wet. After, this damp flax item is ironed. Finally, this laundry material passed to the folding device.
The
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given
flow chart illustrates the working style of a
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laundry
.
Overall
, it is evident that this process consists of multiple steps, beginning with the collection of clothes from the suppliers and ending up with the shifting of the washed items to the folding machine.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laundry
are gathered
from the distributed from which towels and linens
are separated
. After that,
Did you mean "these"?
this
clothes
are collected
into the bags. Then this loaded bags
are transferred
and field into the
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loundernate
, which takes 2 hours for cleaning of the dresses. In the
next
stage, the processing
is done
to drain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
water from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laundry
.
Moreover
, from this drained dressing materials, the towels
are dried
completely, while the linens are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
half-wet.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
, this damp flax item
is ironed
.
Finally
, this
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laundry
material passed to the folding device.
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IELTS academic The flow chart show how the laundry works.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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