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The given pie charts depict the output of a survey conducted on children's activities.

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The given pie charts depict the output of a survey conducted on children's activities. First chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second one shows the participation of girls in different activities. As per the first pie chart, most of the boys are interested in computer games (up to 34%). 26% of boys are interested in playing basketball and 17% of them find soccer an interesting sport. Skateboarding and listening to music attracted less number of boys as compared to basketball, computer games and soccer. Reading stands with just 2% as the least liked activity among the boys. Second pie chart shows the interest of girls in different activities. Dancing is most liked activity by girls with 27% participation. It is surprising to see that 21% of the girls like to read. Computer games, netball, listening music and gymnastics are almost equally distributed among girls with 16%, 15%, 10% and 11% composition of the pie chart, respectively. It can be clearly seen that boys are much interested in computer games, basketball and soccer, whereas girls interest is almost equally distributed among the different activities.
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as compared to basketball, computer
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IELTS academic The given pie charts depict the output of a survey conducted on children's activities.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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