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The given pie charts compare the expenses on 6 different categories in 1998 and 2008 by Canadian Citizens.

The given pie charts compare the expenses on 6 different categories in 1998 and 2008 by Canadian Citizens. gbBp7

A glance at the pie charts illustrate the expenditure which was spent by Canadian inhabitants on six diverse categories from 1988 to 2008. The data has been calibrated in the proportion. As an overall assessment, it is immensely clear that the biggest discrepancies can be witnessed in the depicted chart. Maximum money had been spent on food in 1988, which was replaced by cars after two decades.

A glance at the pie charts illustrate the expenditure which was spent
 by Canadian inhabitants on six diverse categories from 1988 to 2008. The data has been calibrated
 in the proportion.

As an overall
 assessment, it is immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the biggest discrepancies can be witnessed
 in the depicted chart. Maximum money had been spent
 on food in 1988, which was replaced
 by cars after two decades. 

IELTS academic The given pie charts compare the expenses on 6 different categories in 1998 and 2008 by Canadian Citizens.

Academic

American English

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67 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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