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The given pie charts compare the expenses on 6 different categories in 1998 and 2008 by Canadian Citizens.

The given pie charts compare the expenses on 6 different categories in 1998 and 2008 by Canadian Citizens. gbBp7
A glance at the pie charts illustrate the expenditure which was spent by Canadian inhabitants on six diverse categories from 1988 to 2008. The data has been calibrated in the proportion. As an overall assessment, it is immensely clear that the biggest discrepancies can be witnessed in the depicted chart. Maximum money had been spent on food in 1988, which was replaced by cars after two decades.
A glance at the pie charts illustrate the expenditure which
was spent
by Canadian inhabitants on six diverse categories from 1988 to 2008. The data has
been calibrated
in the proportion.

As an
overall
assessment, it is
immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the biggest discrepancies can
be witnessed
in the depicted chart. Maximum money had
been spent
on food in 1988, which
was replaced
by cars after two decades.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts compare the expenses on 6 different categories in 1998 and 2008 by Canadian Citizens.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
67 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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