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The diagram illustrated the numbers of immigration, emigration and net migration in the United Kingdom during the year 1999-2008.

The diagram illustrated the numbers of immigration, emigration and net migration in the United Kingdom during the year 1999-2008. gbBXO
The diagram illustrated the numbers of immigration, emigration and net migration in the United Kingdom during the year 1999-2008. The index fluctuated between years without significant changes. Overall the immigrants increased during this time, however the number of immigrations significant higher. Net migration marginally fluctuated over the period and peaked in 2004-2007. In 1999, more than 450 thousand people came to live in the United Kingdom and the following years there is not much of a growth; while the number of people who emigrated only about 300 thousand people. The net migration in 1999 was over 150 thousand and hit the in 2004 with around 250 thousand people. In 2007 emigration declined suddenly and in 2006, immigration reach a peak with about 600 thousand people. After 2004, immigration rate is still high but the number of people emigration had a substantial. Both in 2001-2003 there was an increase in this period. The number of migrants and immigrants remained peak although the number of net migrations decreased in 2008.
The diagram illustrated the
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in the United Kingdom during the year 1999-2008. The index fluctuated between years without significant
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the immigrants increased during this time,
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significant higher. Net
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marginally
fluctuated over the period and peaked in 2004-2007. In 1999, more than 450 thousand
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came to
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live
in the United Kingdom and the following years there is not much of a growth; while the
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who emigrated
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about 300 thousand
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. The net
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migration
in 1999 was over 150 thousand and hit the in 2004 with around 250 thousand
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people
. In 2007 emigration declined
suddenly
and in 2006,
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immigration
reach a peak with about 600 thousand
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. After 2004,
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rate is
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high
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emigration had a substantial. Both in 2001-2003 there was an increase in this period. The
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number
of migrants and immigrants remained peak although the
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of net
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migrations
decreased in 2008.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrated the numbers of immigration, emigration and net migration in the United Kingdom during the year 1999-2008.

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