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The chart provided the information about immigration ,emigration and net migration in the UK from 1999 to 2008.

The chart provided the information about immigration, emigration and net migration in the UK from 1999 to 2008. MyR6L

The chart provided the information about immigration, emigration and net migration in the UK from 1999 to 2008. Overall, the immigration and emigration were gradually increase year by year; however, the figures for immigration was considerable higher. The net migration had some fluctuation throughout the years but it was highest in the year 2004. In 1999, number of immigration about 460 thousand while the emigration was just below 300 thousand. The number of immigration always higher than the number of emigration. Net migration stood at around 160 thousand and it remained at a similar until 2003 then reached a peak at 250 thousand in 2004 After 2004, the immigration hit the highest point about 600 thousand. Meanwhile, the emigrants experienced a sudden decrease in 2007 before reaching a peak at 420 thousand in 2008. The net migration increased to 240 thousand in 2007, but in 2008 it fell back to 180 thousand

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