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The given pie chart illustrates information which loads percentage of a family's revenue spread into 7 categories

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IELTS academic The given pie chart illustrates information which loads percentage of a family's revenue spread into 7 categories

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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