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The given pie chart gives statistical illustration regarding source of fish exported to the U.S by three different countries canada,china and india during 1998 and 2000. The pattern makes it evident that jn 1998 initially 6.75 billion dollar was spent by U.S. on import of fishes and india was major contributor and figure was 60% whereas for China and canada supply was 13% and 27% respectively. Noticeably

The given pie chart gives statistical illustration regarding source of fish exported to the U. S by three different countries canada, china and india during 1998 and 2000. The pattern makes it evident that jn 1998 initially 6. 75 billion dollar was spent by U. S. on import of fishes and india was major contributor and figure was 60% whereas for China and canada supply was 13% and 27% respectively. Noticeably Baaba
The given pie chart gives statistical illustration regarding source of fish exported to the U. S by three different countries canada, china and india during 1998 and 2000. The pattern makes it evident that jn 1998 initially 6. 75 billion dollar was spent by U. S on import of fishes and india was major contributor and figure was 60% whereas for China and canada supply was 13% and 27% respectively. Noticeably china in 1992 supplied fishes to the US was lowest Lowest percentage 20% compared to other country. India and Canada was highly export 34 and 46% in name order. Most importantly US purchased about 11 billion of dollar. we can be seen data decline of 28% in India. Canada and China was a little difference of 12%. Overall pattern reveals that the source of fish export to the US The number of percentage is up and down by three countries. Rate was fluctuation.
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supply was 13% and 27%
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export 34 and 46% in name order. Most
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data decline of 28% in India. Canada and China was a
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difference of 12%.
Overall
pattern reveals that the source of fish export to the US The number of percentage is up and down by three countries. Rate was fluctuation.
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IELTS academic The given pie chart gives statistical illustration regarding source of fish exported to the U. S by three different countries canada, china and india during 1998 and 2000. The pattern makes it evident that jn 1998 initially 6. 75 billion dollar was spent by U. S. on import of fishes and india was major contributor and figure was 60% whereas for China and canada supply was 13% and 27% respectively. Noticeably

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