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The two maps show the layout of the same seaside village in 1979 and at present.

The two maps show the layout of the same seaside village in 1979 and at present. mbbxL
The two maps highlight the main alterations which have taken place in the identical seaside between the year 1979 and today. In general, over the period, it is noticeable that most infrastructures in the seaside have been transformed with housing and recreations, while other buildings remain unchangeably. One interesting change is that the total number of houses have been increased, from 12 in 1979 to 16 at present. Furthermore, restaurants and apartments were erected to replace shops and fish markets where still found in 1979. There has been also added new car park next to the hotel. The most notable changes are the disappearance of the fishing port, as well as the creation of golf course and football courts to improve social life in the north-east, where farmland and forest area used to be in 1979. And final thing is that hotel and the main roads stability remained throughout the period.
The two maps highlight the main alterations which have taken place in the identical seaside between the year 1979 and
today
.

In general
, over the period, it is noticeable that most infrastructures in the seaside have
been transformed
with housing and recreations, while other buildings remain
unchangeably
. One interesting
change
is that the total number of
houses
have
been increased
, from 12 in 1979 to 16 at present.
Furthermore
, restaurants and apartments
were erected
to replace shops and fish markets where
still
found in 1979. There has been
also
added
new car park
next
to the hotel. The most notable
changes
are the disappearance of the fishing port,
as well
as the creation of golf course and football courts to
improve
social life in the north-east, where farmland and forest area
used
to be in 1979. And final thing is that hotel and the main
roads
stability remained throughout the period.
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IELTS academic The two maps show the layout of the same seaside village in 1979 and at present.

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2 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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