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Overall, it is evident that the number of cameras to check pace increased in four years. Moreover, the rate of accident, as well as percentage of death, also rose throughout the year.

Overall, it is evident that the number of cameras to check pace increased in four years. Moreover, the rate of accident, as well as percentage of death, also rose throughout the year. dkkdP
The bar graph and line chart illustrate the change in the number of speed cameras and the percentage of accidents and deaths on the roads of Melbourne from 2002 to 2005. Overall, it is evident that the number of cameras to check pace increased in four years. Moreover, the rate of accident, as well as percentage of death, also rose throughout the year. To begin with the bar graph, the figure of speed cameras was approximately 30 in 2002. However, it rose steadily with more than 10 cameras in 2003. Additionally, in 2004, the number of cameras to trace the acceleration of vehicles went up by almost 60. Surprisingly, the number of speed cameras increased drastically and peaked at close to 150 speed cameras. Coming to the line chart, the percentage of deaths was mostly half of the accidents. In 2002, the ratio of accidents was almost 3. 25%. Which fell however maintained at 3. 20% in 2003. In contrast, the percentage of deaths was precisely similar in 2002 and 2003 accounts for 0. 75% every year. Furthermore, there was a surge in the ratio of accidents and deaths were noticed of 3. 75% and 1% respectively. Moreover, the percentage of accidents and deaths surged in the following year. In addition, it peaked at 4% and more than 1% individually.
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was approximately 30 in 2002.
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in 2003.
Additionally
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to trace the acceleration of vehicles went up by almost 60.
Surprisingly
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increased
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of deaths was
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. In 2002, the ratio of
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was almost 3. 25%. Which fell
however
maintained at 3. 20% in 2003.
In contrast
, the
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of deaths was
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similar in 2002 and 2003 accounts for 0. 75% every year.
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, there was a surge in the ratio of
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and deaths surged in the following year.
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, it peaked at 4% and more than 1%
individually
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IELTS academic Overall, it is evident that the number of cameras to check pace increased in four years. Moreover, the rate of accident, as well as percentage of death, also rose throughout the year.

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