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The given picture shows the different stages of making glass, specifically from the recycling process.

The given picture shows the different stages of making glass, specifically from the recycling process. ldmM1
The given picture shows the different stages of making glass, specifically from the recycling process. Overall it can be seen that, there are 7 steps include the recycle program and to two places are using the process, that is processing plant and glass factory. In the first step, glass bottles gathered from public's and it converted into three sections which is Green Brown and clear. After that, the collected materials transported into processing unit where the materials classified into metal cap and plastic cap then it broken into small pieces. Apart from that, it transport to the glass factory by the car. In glass factory majorly include twi steps, at first step raw materials and glass heated into high temperature, 1200 degree Celsius in the furnace, then the following stage and final stage, the melted mixture is then used to make new bottles
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glass
,
specifically
from the recycling process.

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seen
that, there are 7
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steps
include the recycle program and to two places are using the process,
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processing plant and
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glass
factory.

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first
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,
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glass
bottles gathered from public's and it converted into three sections which is Green Brown and
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clear
. After that, the collected materials transported into processing unit where the materials classified into metal cap and plastic cap then
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broken
into
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small
pieces. Apart from that, it
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transport
to the
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glass
factory by the car. In
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glass
factory
majorly
include
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twi
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, at
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raw materials and
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glass
heated into high temperature, 1200 degree Celsius in the furnace, then the following stage and final stage, the melted mixture is then
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IELTS academic The given picture shows the different stages of making glass, specifically from the recycling process.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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