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The chart below shows the use of computers and the internet in the arab world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the use of computers and the internet in the arab world. K0P5N

The represented bar graph elucidates the information regarding the usage of internet and computers per thousand inhabitants in the nine different arab nations. The data is calibrated in numbers. It is evident that, in UAE the penetration of internet is approximately 340, which is two-fold from the use of computers. While kuwait has 140 computer and hundered Internet users, lebanon accounted for 60 and 80 computer and internet users. Besides, saudi arabia personifies a significant difference in this trend. It has six times more computer users(60) comparatively to internet one(10). Probing further, jordan and morocco depict almost similar data with lower than 50 users, but there internet users are higher than internet ones. Altbough syria has nearly only 30 computer usera, it is three-fold as compare to internet. Egypt also has 25 and 20 inhabitants who uses computers and Internet. Apart from that, morocco has equal number of both computer and internet users near about 20. Overall, there are differences in number of people who uses computer and internet in arabic country, whilst same number of computer and internet users is visible only in morocco.

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kuwait
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lebanon
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. Besides
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saudi arabia
 personifies a significant difference in this trend. It has six times more computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users(60)
comparatively
 to internet one(10).

Probing further
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jordan
 and morocco depict almost similar data with lower than 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
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only
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, it is three-fold as compare to internet. Egypt also
 has 25 and 20 inhabitants who Did you mean "use"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'inhabitants' should be used.use
uses
 computers and Internet. Apart from that, morocco has equal number of both computer and internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
 near about 20.

Overall
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uses
 computer and internet in Possible spelling mistake found.ArabicArabia
arabic
 country, whilst same number of computer and internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
 is visible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in morocco. 