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international visitors to new zealand and the most used transport

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The bar chart below provide information about percentages of the lost used transport vehicles for visiting New Zealand by international visitors. In general, the highest bar belongs to cars which means visitors from all around the world rather choose cars over any others options showed in a bar chart as the commenest way of transportation. As it can be seen, plane and coach almost equally share the same percentage after cars with more than 30 percent. The third place belongs to train by 20 percent and the rest would be follow by boat with almost 7 percent as the least used transport vehicle by visitors. as it showed before in the chart, cars with almost 70 percent own the highest chance of being collected as transport for visitors. Overall, it can be observed that the private transport like cars are the most picked up options by people and they seem most likely to use it than public transport.
The bar chart below provide information about percentages of the lost
used
transport
vehicles for visiting New Zealand by international visitors.

In general
, the highest bar belongs to
cars
which means visitors from all around the world
rather
choose
cars
over any others options
showed
in a bar chart as the
commenest
way of transportation.

As it can be
seen
,
plane
and coach almost
equally
share the same percentage after
cars
with more than 30 percent.

The third place belongs to train by 20 percent and the rest would be
follow
by boat with almost 7 percent as the least
used
transport
vehicle by visitors.

as
it
showed
before
in the chart,
cars
with almost 70 percent
own
the highest chance of
being collected
as
transport
for visitors.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that the private
transport
like
cars
are the most picked up options by
people and
they seem most likely to
use
it than public
transport
.
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IELTS academic international visitors to new zealand and the most used transport

Academic
  American English
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158 words
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