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The given picture below show the process of getting a licence of driving

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The given process chart illustrates the procedure of taking a driving licence. Aur it is Apparent that taking I test is most important step in this process if a person is failed then he is not applicable however if he passes then he is applicable for next steps. To begin with the first step of getting a driving licence for city one has to go to licence Tantra and complete an application form. Then, candidate gives the test of his eyes if he fails in it then he cannot get a driving licence however if he passes in this test then they have to complete formalities. Movie for other applicable person paid c and he can take right written test for driving test but in the case of failure in written test more than two times then they will have to pay fee again and further start this procedure while a person who passes in this test he can get his driving licence.
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Tantra and complete an application form. Then, candidate gives the
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however
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then they
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complete formalities. Movie for other applicable person paid
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this procedure while a person who passes in this
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