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The given period shows the process of making electricity from coal

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The provided diagram illustrates the process of making electricity from coal Thiz electricity is used for houses and industries. To start with, the first step is mined from coal mines this coal is crush with the crusher after that crusher coal is, then transported first by cart and then then by truck to the gassfier producing the gas and the solid waste is eliminated Probing ahead, the sex step is the gad sent the cooler where is gas powers colled After that it is sent to gas power plant where is make electricity and waste heat thrown the outside and the last and finally step is made electricity and sent the electricity houses and industries. Overall, it is clear seen that the electricity process is very long and complex. There are seven steps to make electricity.
The provided diagram illustrates the process of making
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electricity
from coal
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Thiz
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electricity
is
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used
for
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houses
and industries. To
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start
with, the
first
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step
is mined
from coal mines this coal is crush with the crusher after that crusher coal is, then transported
first
by cart and
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then then
by truck to the
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gassfier
producing the gas and the solid waste
is eliminated
Probing ahead, the sex
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step
is
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the gad
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sent
the cooler where is gas powers
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colled
After that it is
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sent
to gas power plant where is
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make
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electricity
and waste heat thrown the outside and the last and
finally
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step
is made
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electricity
and
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sent
the
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electricity
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houses
and industries.
Overall
, it is
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clear
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seen
that the
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electricity
process is
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very
long and complex. There are seven
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steps
to
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make
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electricity
.
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IELTS academic The given period shows the process of making electricity from coal

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