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university graduates, Canada, 1992-2007

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The graph illustrates the number of university graduates in 15 years since 1992. Overall, the number of females and males who graduated from the university increased significantly; However, the number of females that graduated from university was more than the number of males who graduated from university. In 1992, the number of females who graduated started about 100, 000 graduates-higher than 70000 graduates of males. After 5 years, both of them witnessed a slight rise in the number of university graduates that female graduates increased slightly by 5000 to 105000 and male graduates rose slowly to approximately 80000. However, in the next 6 years, both of them showed no change, just a marginal fluctuation. Between 2001 to 2006, the number of female graduates saw a significant rise by approximately 100000 of 150000 graduates. Similarly, there was a dramatic increase of approximately 100000 in the number of male graduates.
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. In 1992, the
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about 100, 000 graduates-higher than 70000
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. After 5 years, both of them witnessed a slight rise in the
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IELTS academic university graduates, Canada, 1992-2007

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