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The given natural cyclic diagram illustrates the data about the life span of a lady bird, while its body is shown in the second diagram.

The given natural cyclic diagram illustrates the data about the life span of a lady bird, while its body is shown in the second diagram. VL2J
The given natural cyclic diagram illustrates the data about the life span of a lady bird, while its body is shown in the second diagram. In overall, as can be from the graph that this life cycle is incompassed of 4 major steps ranging from laying egg to reaching a maturity. As for its anatomy, a mature lady bird has 8 main body parts. Looking at lady bird's longevity, the cycle begins when ladybird deposit eggs on leaves in batches of up to 30. Having hatched within 2 to 5 days, a larva shids its skin over a 3 week period in the larval stage, prior to becoming a pupa. During the next 7 days pupa undergoes the sleepy pupal period. Following that it turns into a newly emerged ladybird. The cycle commences over again. Turning to anatomy, lady bird's wings are covered with red elytra and black spots. It has 6 legs in total, 3 on the left and the right as well. Its eyes and 2 antennas are positioned on its head, which are next to pronotum.
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natural cyclic diagram illustrates the data about the life span of a
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lady
bird, while its body
is shown
in the second diagram.

In
overall
, as can be from the graph that this life cycle is
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incompassed
of 4 major steps ranging from laying egg to reaching
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a maturity
. As for its anatomy, a mature
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lady
bird has 8 main body parts.

Looking at
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lady
bird's longevity, the cycle
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begins
when ladybird deposit eggs on
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leaves
in batches of up to 30. Having hatched within 2 to 5 days, a larva
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shids
its skin over a
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3 week
period in the larval stage, prior to becoming a pupa. During the
next
7 days pupa undergoes the sleepy pupal period. Following that it turns into a
newly
emerged ladybird. The cycle commences over again.

Turning to anatomy,
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lady
bird's wings
are covered
with red
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elytra
and black spots. It has 6 legs in total, 3 on the
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left
and the right
as well
. Its eyes and 2 antennas
are positioned
on its head, which are
next
to
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pronotum
.
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IELTS academic The given natural cyclic diagram illustrates the data about the life span of a lady bird, while its body is shown in the second diagram.

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