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The diagram illustrates the process by which tea is produced in India and China and how a cup of tea is prepared.

The diagram illustrates the process by which tea is produced in India and China and how a cup of tea is prepared. RomP

The diagram illustrates the process by which tea is produced in India and China and how a cup of tea is prepared. In overall, there are eighteen stages involved from sowing the tea seeds to consuming. First of all, tea seeds are planted scattering them in the ground. Grown in the heat of the sun the tea leaves are picked and placed in baskets before spreading under the sunlight to dry. Following this, the leaves are packed into boxes and delivered to supermarkets on lorries where it reaches its consumers. In the next stage, the tea boxes are purchased by customers and taken home to make a cup of tea. In order to prepare a cup of tea, first of all the kettle is filled with water and boiled. A teabag is then put in a cup before hot water is poured. At this point, the tea in the cup is settled for a couple of minutes. Once you add milk and sugar the tea is ready to drink.

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tea
is produced
 in India and China and how a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cup
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
is prepared
. In overall
, there are eighteen stages involved from sowing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 seeds to consuming.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 seeds are planted
 scattering them in the ground. Grown in the heat of the sun the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
are picked
 and placed in baskets This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 spreading under the sunlight to dry. Following this, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
are packed
 into boxes and delivered to supermarkets on lorries where it reaches its consumers. In the next
 stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 boxes are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 by customers and taken home to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cup
 of tea.

In order to prepare a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cup
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
 the kettle is filled
 with water and boiled. A teabag is then put in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cup
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 hot water is poured
. At this point, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cup
is settled
 for a couple of minutes. Once you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 milk and sugar the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 is ready to drink. 