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Comparison of different types of energy production for 2 years in France was demonstrated in pie charts. Units are measured in percentage.

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Comparison of different types of energy production for 2 years in France was demonstrated in pie charts. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, it is obvious that coal was mostly produced energy type in both years, to the contrary other category holds last place in 5 categories. Although the petro production declined within 5 years period, nuclear production shows growth. Coal production slightly increase in 5 years, accounted for roughly less than a third of whole production in both years. Gas production also witnessed similar pattern to coal, becoming second preferred energy production by holding approximately 30% in both years. Opposed to that, petro production comprised of less than a third in 1995, whilst decline gradually to about a fifth in 2005. Both nuclear production and other category experienced growth, other consisted of one in twenty of total energy consumption in 1995, whereas nuclear holds 6% of it. However, nuclear increased about one in tenth in 5 years, other category about doubled to 9%.

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