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The pie chart given information about average household expenditures in different category in year 1950 and 2010.

The pie chart given information about average household expenditures in different category in year 1950 and 2010. rKA5J
The rendered diagram is a statistical representation which delineate household expenses on housing, food, education, healthcare, transportation and other items in year 1950 and 2010. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, housing came at the top of the least as the higher in 1950 whereas housing and food was the greatest in among all categories and healthcare was the least amount in 2010. It is conspicuous that the maximum numbers of household spending on housing in 1950 which was accounted for 72%. Afterwards, spending on feed was the second highest amount, roughly 11. 2 percent. Household outlay in healthcare, education, transportation were 2. 4%, 6. 6%, 3. 3% in 1950, respectively. Likewise, only 4. 4% has been spent on other items. It is apparently seen that household expenditures was declined after 6 decades to reach only 22 percentage. Meanwhile, for food had a mark increased approximately 3 times into last 60 years. Interestingly, huge improvement in other items which increased 14% in year 2010. Household disbursement on transportation was 14%, education was remained relatively stable and healthcare has lowest amount in year 2010.
The rendered diagram is a statistical representation which delineate
household
expenses on housing, food, education, healthcare, transportation and other items in
year
1950 and 2010. Units
are measured
in percentage.
Overall
, housing came at the top of the least as the higher in 1950 whereas housing and food was the greatest in among all categories and healthcare was the least amount in 2010. It is conspicuous that the maximum numbers of
household
spending on housing in 1950 which
was accounted
for 72%. Afterwards, spending on feed was the second highest amount, roughly 11. 2 percent.
Household
outlay in healthcare, education, transportation were 2. 4%, 6. 6%, 3. 3% in 1950,
respectively
.
Likewise
,
only
4. 4% has
been spent
on other items. It is
apparently
seen
that
household
expenditures
was declined
after 6 decades to reach
only
22 percentage. Meanwhile, for food had a mark increased approximately 3 times into last 60 years.
Interestingly
, huge improvement in other items which increased 14% in
year
2010.
Household
disbursement on transportation was 14%, education
was remained
relatively
stable and healthcare has
lowest
amount in
year
2010.
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