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The bar chart below shows the types of music bought in the USA in 2010, by age group.

The bar chart below shows the types of music bought in the USA in 2010, by age group. 2bJBo

This bar chart is talking about the USA sales of recordings by age group and music genre in 2010. Young people between the ages of 16 to 22 prefer Pop because Pop music are more musical and popular elements. People between 23 to 31 are more inclined to rock music because they have entered middle age and miss the vitality of their youth. People aged to 33 to 45 can accept all kinds of music styles, except pop music, probably because they have little contact with pop music. Besides that, people aged 46 to 57 is the retirement age, so enjoy their life by drinking and listening to rock music in their spare time. People over the age of 58 gradually slow down their pace of life and live more comfortably, so they prefer to listen to classical music. Add individual feedback

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