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The given map shows some change in a town in UK in 2015 and 2030.

The given map shows some change in a town in UK in 2015 and 2030. 1bPly

The map depicts the information about some changes in a town in the UK in 2015 and 2030. Overall, it is clearly seen that many facilities will be introduced in a town in upcoming year. There was a hospital to the west North side of first map while had been enlarge after 15 years. to the top there was some frees however would be cut down replaced by sports side there was fixed one carpark time to come there another new enterance likely to be 2 car park. In the centre there was a road and industrial area but in upcoming days there another new area could be open. In 2015, in the centre there was a library alse will be increased and new building of school establish near the library over given period.

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some
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changes
 in a town in the UK in 2015 and 2030. Overall
, it is clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 facilities will be introduced
 in a town in upcoming year. There was a hospital to the west North side of first
 map while had been Consider using a past participle here: "enlarged".enlarged
enlarge
 after 15 years. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 the top there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 frees however
 would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
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fixed
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carpark
 time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
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enterance
 likely to be 2 car Possible agreement error. The noun 'park' seems to be countable, so consider using: "parks".parks
park
. In the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 there was a road and industrial area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in upcoming days there another new area could be open. In 2015, in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 there was a library Possible spelling mistake found.alsoelsefalsealeapseales
alse
 will be increased
 and new building of school establish near the library over This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period. 