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The given map show the different changes at seaside resort Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The given map show the different changes at seaside resort Templeton between 1990 and 2005. BwMWX

The provided maps illustrate the difference that has occurred over the period of 15 years, from 1990 to 2005, at the Templeton seaside resort. In general, it can be visibly seen development & industrialization is noteworthy in the second map compared to the first map, during the last 15 years. One of the main things to notice in the second map, how the railway station extended the rail tracks to south, alongside the sea with and addition of car ferry, also a bridge was built to connect the railway track from one side of the riverbank to the other. In addition to the road between the supermarket & the skyscrapers, no other roads were added. Most of the scattered trees are replaced by different buildings such as: a big supermarket, multiple residential houses & many skyscrapers. Another new addition is the airport above the school. What remained the same during the last 15 years were the school, the hospital and lake on the northeastern side in the first map.

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 illustrate the difference that has occurred over the period of 15 years, from 1990 to 2005, at the Templeton seaside resort.

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 development & industrialization is noteworthy in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 compared to the first
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map
, during the last 15 years.

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, how the railway station extended the rail This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
tracks
 to south, alongside the sea with and addition of car ferry, also
 a bridge was built
 to connect the railway This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 from one side of the riverbank to the other. In addition
 to the road between the supermarket & the skyscrapers, no other roads were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Most of the scattered trees are replaced
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different
 buildings such as: a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 supermarket, multiple residential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 & This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 skyscrapers. Another new addition is the airport above the school. What remained the same during the last 15 years were the school, the hospital and lake on the northeastern side in the first
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map
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