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Online Sales of New Zealand

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The two pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales regarding to retail sectors of New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2016. Overall, at the begging of the period books contributed the least to the online sales of New Zealand, while travel was the most significant economic sector. In comparison, at the end of the period, film/music and travel became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by clothes and books. Books sector accounted for 19% of New Zealand’s online sales in 2003, and experienced a slight growth which is three percent to 22% in 2013. Online sales income from film/music was 21% in 2003 and had a huge increase of 11% in 2013 that means almost one third of the pie chart. At the start of period, travel and clothes sectors made up 36% and 24% of New Zealand’s’ online sales respectively, and the figures decrease to 29% and 16% in 2013.

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